uk-business-english
寫給英國讀者的商務英文:EN-GB 拼字、語氣階梯與避雷用語
中文翻譯
--- name: uk-business-english description: "專業溝通用的英式商務英文寫作風格:精緻、含蓄,採用 EN-GB 拼字(colour、organise、centre)。只要使用者是寫給英國讀者看的,就用這個 skill,包括 email、聊天訊息、提案、客戶溝通、部落格文章、網頁文案,或任何商務寫作。適用於起草、編輯和檢查專業文字的語氣。" --- # UK Business English 專業而有分寸。有禮貌但不諂媚。直接但不唐突。自然帶有英式風格,但不誇張成漫畫。寫起來要像一位剛好是英國人的稱職專業人士,不像狄更斯筆下的角色,不像美國的科技新創,也不像剛學會 "whilst" 這個字的人。 ## 拼字(EN-GB) | 模式 | 英式 | 不是 | |---------|---------|-----| | -our | colour, favour, honour, behaviour | color, favor | | -ise | organise, realise, specialise, recognise | organize, realize | | -re | centre, fibre, metre, theatre | center, fiber | | -ence | licence (noun), defence, offence | license (noun), defense | | -ise/-ize | 英國兩種都接受,為了一致性建議用 -ise | — | | 雙 L | travelling, cancelling, modelling | traveling, canceling | | -ogue | catalogue, dialogue, analogue | catalog, dialog | | -ement | judgement, acknowledgement | judgment(只在法律上用) | **名詞/動詞的拼法差異:** | 名詞 | 動詞 | |------|------| | licence | license | | practice | practise | | advice | advise | **常見陷阱:** enquiry(一般用)、inquiry(正式/法律用)、kerb(路緣)、tyre(輪胎)、programme(一般用)、program(電腦用)、cheque(支票)、grey(不是 gray)。 **日期格式:** 日 月 年,中間不加逗號:15 January 2026。縮寫:15 Jan 2026。絕對不要用 月/日/年。 ## 語氣階梯 依情境調整正式程度。預設用「有禮貌的專業」,比澳洲或美國的基準再正式一點,但仍然溫暖。 | 情境 | 正式程度 | 問候 | 結尾 | |---------|-----------|----------|----------| | Slack/Teams(內部) | 輕鬆 | "Hi" / 名字 | 不需要 | | 寫給既有客戶的 email | 有禮貌的專業 | "Hi [Name]" | "Kind regards" / "Thanks" | | 寫給新客戶的 email | 專業 | "Dear [Name]" / "Hi [Name]" | "Kind regards" | | 提案或報價 | 專業 | "Dear [Name]" | "Kind regards" / "Yours sincerely" | | 會後跟進 | 有禮貌的專業 | "Hi [Name]" | "Kind regards" / "Thanks" | | 陌生開發信 | 專業 | "Dear [Name]" / "Hi [Name]" | "Kind regards" | | 正式信函或法律文件 | 正式 | "Dear [Name]" / "Dear Sir or Madam" | "Yours sincerely" / "Yours faithfully" | **規則:** 知道對方名字時用 "Yours sincerely"。不知道時(Dear Sir or Madam)用 "Yours faithfully"。用錯會讓人覺得你粗心。 **絕對不要用:** 第一次接觸就用 "Hey"、"To Whom It May Concern"(改用 "Dear Sir or Madam")、"Warmest regards"、"Respectfully yours"。 ## 結尾用語排名 在英國中小企業的情境中,從最常用到最少用: 1. **Kind regards**:預設,幾乎哪裡都適用 2. **Thanks** / **Many thanks**:感謝對方付出,或有事請對方幫忙時 3. **Best wishes**:溫暖,比 Kind regards 稍微不那麼正式 4. **Regards**:中性,稍微冷一點 5. **Yours sincerely**:正式信函、寫給新客戶的提案 **避免:** 單獨一個 "Best"(讀起來像美式)、第一次接觸就用 "Cheers"(建立起關係之後就沒問題)、"Warm regards"(用過頭了)、"Ta"(對任何書面文字來說都太隨便)。 ## 避免清單 ### 美式用語 看到這些就直覺地換掉: | 不要寫 | 改寫成 | |-----------|-------| | "reach out" | "get in touch" / "contact" | | "touch base" | "catch up" / "check in" | | "circle back" | "come back to" / "follow up" | | "leverage"(動詞) | "use" / "make the most of" | | "moving forward" | "going forward" / "from here"(或乾脆拿掉) | | "actionable insights" | "useful findings" / "what we found" | | "deep dive" | "closer look" / "detailed review" | | "bandwidth"(指時間) | "time" / "capacity" | | "gotten" | "got" | | "could care less" | "couldn't care less" | | "loop in" | "include" / "copy in" | | "deliverables" | "what we'll provide" / "the work" | | "Monday through Friday" | "Monday to Friday" | | "on the team" | "in the team" | ### 刻意硬裝的英式用語 書面的專業溝通要避免: - **"Cheerio"、"pip pip"、"tally-ho"**:專業寫作裡絕對不要 - **"Bloody"、"blimey"、"crikey"**:只限口語,就算口語也要少用 - **過度使用 "rather" 和 "quite"**:一封 email 一個就夠了 - **"I dare say"**:聽起來像古裝劇 - **"Awfully good"**:反諷式的輕描淡寫在商務寫作裡有極限 - **"Old chap"、"old boy"**:這個世紀不用了 ## 寫作原則 1. **先講重點。** 第一句話就回答問題或說明目的。背景放在後面,不要放前面。英式的禮貌不代表要把重點埋起來。 2. **段落要短。** 最多兩到三句。一段一個想法。留白是你的朋友。 3. **適度使用縮寫。** email 裡用 "We've"、"I'll"、"that's" 沒問題。提案和正式信函少用。目標是有人味,不是機器人,但基準比美式或澳式英文稍微正式一點。 4. **用主動語態。** 要寫 "We'll send the report on Monday",不要寫 "The report will be dispatched on Monday." 5. **具體勝過模糊。** 要寫 "I'll have this to you by Thursday",不要寫 "I'll revert at my earliest convenience." 6. **一封 email 一個請求。** 有多個請求?編號列出來。不要把第二個請求埋在第四段裡。 7. **寧可低調,不要誇大。** "That's quite a good result" 比 "That's an absolutely incredible, game-changing result!" 更有效果。克制能展現自信。 ## 範例 ### 給既有客戶的進度更新 **太公司腔:** > Dear Mr Thompson, I write to apprise you of the current status of your website redesign project. Please find herewith a summary of deliverables completed to date and the projected timeline for the remaining programme of work. **對的語氣:** > Hi David, > > Quick update on the website -- we've finished the homepage and the three main service pages. Coming together nicely. > > Next up is the contact form and booking system, which we'll have ready by the end of next week. I'll send through a preview link once it's on the staging site. > > Kind regards, > [Your name] ### 送出報價 **太僵硬:** > Dear Client, Please find enclosed our formal quotation for the proposed scope of works as discussed. We trust this meets with your approval and look forward to receiving your favourable response at your earliest convenience. **對的語氣:** > Hi Sarah, > > Thanks for the call yesterday -- good to get a clear picture of what you need. > > I've put together a quote based on what we discussed. In short: GBP 3,500 for the full site, including the booking system. That covers design, development, and getting it live on your domain. > > Happy to arrange a call if you have any questions. > > Kind regards, > [Your name] ### 拒絕請求 **太直接:** > We can't do that. **太委婉:** > Whilst we greatly appreciate your most kind enquiry and would very much welcome the opportunity to explore this avenue further, regrettably it would not be possible for us to accommodate this particular request at the present time. **對的語氣:** > Hi Mark, > > Thanks for thinking of us for this. Unfortunately it's not something we're able to take on at the moment -- we're fully committed through March. > > If timing works, we'd be happy to look at it in April. Otherwise, I can suggest a couple of firms who might be able to help sooner. > > Kind regards, > [Your name] ## 情境規則 **企業客戶:** 配合他們的正式程度,但保持你的清晰。如果他們用,你就用 "Dear [Name]" 和 "Yours sincerely"。絕對不要跟著用他們的行話,他們說 "key learnings going forward",你就說 "what we've found"。 **傳達壞消息:** 要直接但體貼。說明問題、簡短解釋、提出前進的路。英式的禮貌代表措辭有講究,但不要用太多限定詞把壞消息包到訊息都不見了。一個 "apologies" 就夠。 **報價:** 清楚且有自信。要寫 "The cost for this is GBP X",不要寫 "We would wish to propose a fee of GBP X for your kind consideration."。寫明包含哪些項目。明確說明 VAT 的處理方式(含稅/未稅)。 **拒絕:** 有禮貌且簡短。"Unfortunately" 就已經夠了,不需要三句前言。給出理由,可能的話提供替代方案。 **跟進:** 有目的但不要逼人。"Just checking in on this" 可以。"I trust this finds you well" 是廢話,拿掉。"Wanted to bring this back to the top of your inbox" 也行。
英文原文
--- name: uk-business-english description: "British business English writing style for professional communications — polished, understated, EN-GB spelling (colour, organise, centre). Use whenever the user is writing for a British audience: emails, chat messages, proposals, client communications, blog posts, web copy, or any business writing. Apply to drafting, editing, and tone-checking professional text." --- # UK Business English Professional and measured. Polite without being obsequious. Direct without being abrupt. Naturally British without being a caricature. Write like a competent professional who happens to be British -- not like a Dickens character, not like an American tech startup, and not like someone who just discovered the word "whilst". ## Spelling (EN-GB) | Pattern | British | Not | |---------|---------|-----| | -our | colour, favour, honour, behaviour | color, favor | | -ise | organise, realise, specialise, recognise | organize, realize | | -re | centre, fibre, metre, theatre | center, fiber | | -ence | licence (noun), defence, offence | license (noun), defense | | -ise/-ize | Both accepted in GB; prefer -ise for consistency | — | | Double L | travelling, cancelling, modelling | traveling, canceling | | -ogue | catalogue, dialogue, analogue | catalog, dialog | | -ement | judgement, acknowledgement | judgment (legal only) | **Noun/verb splits:** | Noun | Verb | |------|------| | licence | license | | practice | practise | | advice | advise | **Common traps:** enquiry (general), inquiry (formal/legal), kerb (road edge), tyre (wheel), programme (general), program (computing), cheque (payment), grey (not gray). **Date format:** Day Month Year, no comma -- 15 January 2026. Abbreviated: 15 Jan 2026. Never Month/Day/Year. ## Tone Ladder Match formality to context. Default to "polite professional" -- a step more formal than Australian or American baseline, but still warm. | Context | Formality | Greeting | Sign-off | |---------|-----------|----------|----------| | Slack/Teams (internal) | Casual | "Hi" / first name | None needed | | Email to existing client | Polite professional | "Hi [Name]" | "Kind regards" / "Thanks" | | Email to new client | Professional | "Dear [Name]" / "Hi [Name]" | "Kind regards" | | Proposal or quote | Professional | "Dear [Name]" | "Kind regards" / "Yours sincerely" | | Follow-up after meeting | Polite professional | "Hi [Name]" | "Kind regards" / "Thanks" | | Cold outreach | Professional | "Dear [Name]" / "Hi [Name]" | "Kind regards" | | Formal letter or legal | Formal | "Dear [Name]" / "Dear Sir or Madam" | "Yours sincerely" / "Yours faithfully" | **Rule:** "Yours sincerely" when you know their name. "Yours faithfully" when you don't (Dear Sir or Madam). Getting this wrong marks you as careless. **Never use:** "Hey" in first contact, "To Whom It May Concern" (use "Dear Sir or Madam"), "Warmest regards", "Respectfully yours". ## Sign-off Ranking From most to least common in UK SME context: 1. **Kind regards** -- default, works almost everywhere 2. **Thanks** / **Many thanks** -- when appreciating effort or asking for something 3. **Best wishes** -- warm, slightly less formal than Kind regards 4. **Regards** -- neutral, slightly cooler 5. **Yours sincerely** -- formal letters, proposals to new clients **Avoid:** "Best" on its own (reads as American), "Cheers" in first contact (fine once rapport is established), "Warm regards" (overdone), "Ta" (too informal for anything written). ## Avoid List ### Americanisms Replace these reflexively: | Instead of | Write | |-----------|-------| | "reach out" | "get in touch" / "contact" | | "touch base" | "catch up" / "check in" | | "circle back" | "come back to" / "follow up" | | "leverage" (verb) | "use" / "make the most of" | | "moving forward" | "going forward" / "from here" (or drop it) | | "actionable insights" | "useful findings" / "what we found" | | "deep dive" | "closer look" / "detailed review" | | "bandwidth" (for time) | "time" / "capacity" | | "gotten" | "got" | | "could care less" | "couldn't care less" | | "loop in" | "include" / "copy in" | | "deliverables" | "what we'll provide" / "the work" | | "Monday through Friday" | "Monday to Friday" | | "on the team" | "in the team" | ### Forced Britishisms Avoid in written professional comms: - **"Cheerio", "pip pip", "tally-ho"** -- never in professional writing - **"Bloody", "blimey", "crikey"** -- spoken register only, and even then sparingly - **Overuse of "rather" and "quite"** -- one per email is plenty - **"I dare say"** -- sounds like a period drama - **"Awfully good"** -- ironic understatement has limits in business writing - **"Old chap", "old boy"** -- not this century ## Writing Principles 1. **Lead with the point.** First sentence answers the question or states the purpose. Context comes after, not before. British politeness doesn't mean burying the lead. 2. **Short paragraphs.** Two to three sentences max. One idea per paragraph. White space is your friend. 3. **Measured contractions.** "We've", "I'll", "that's" are fine in emails. Use fewer in proposals and formal letters. The goal is human, not robotic -- but the baseline is slightly more formal than American or Australian English. 4. **Active voice.** "We'll send the report on Monday" not "The report will be dispatched on Monday." 5. **Specific over vague.** "I'll have this to you by Thursday" not "I'll revert at my earliest convenience." 6. **One ask per email.** Multiple requests? Number them. Don't bury the second ask in paragraph four. 7. **Understate rather than overstate.** "That's quite a good result" lands better than "That's an absolutely incredible, game-changing result!" Restraint signals confidence. ## Examples ### Status update to existing client **Too corporate:** > Dear Mr Thompson, I write to apprise you of the current status of your website redesign project. Please find herewith a summary of deliverables completed to date and the projected timeline for the remaining programme of work. **Right tone:** > Hi David, > > Quick update on the website -- we've finished the homepage and the three main service pages. Coming together nicely. > > Next up is the contact form and booking system, which we'll have ready by the end of next week. I'll send through a preview link once it's on the staging site. > > Kind regards, > [Your name] ### Delivering a quote **Too stiff:** > Dear Client, Please find enclosed our formal quotation for the proposed scope of works as discussed. We trust this meets with your approval and look forward to receiving your favourable response at your earliest convenience. **Right tone:** > Hi Sarah, > > Thanks for the call yesterday -- good to get a clear picture of what you need. > > I've put together a quote based on what we discussed. In short: GBP 3,500 for the full site, including the booking system. That covers design, development, and getting it live on your domain. > > Happy to arrange a call if you have any questions. > > Kind regards, > [Your name] ### Saying no to a request **Too blunt:** > We can't do that. **Too soft:** > Whilst we greatly appreciate your most kind enquiry and would very much welcome the opportunity to explore this avenue further, regrettably it would not be possible for us to accommodate this particular request at the present time. **Right tone:** > Hi Mark, > > Thanks for thinking of us for this. Unfortunately it's not something we're able to take on at the moment -- we're fully committed through March. > > If timing works, we'd be happy to look at it in April. Otherwise, I can suggest a couple of firms who might be able to help sooner. > > Kind regards, > [Your name] ## Context Rules **Corporate clients:** Match their formality but keep your clarity. "Dear [Name]" and "Yours sincerely" if they use it. Never mirror their jargon -- if they say "key learnings going forward", you say "what we've found". **Delivering bad news:** Be direct but considerate. State the issue, explain briefly, offer the path forward. British politeness means framing matters, but don't wrap bad news in so many qualifiers that the message gets lost. One "apologies" is sufficient. **Quoting prices:** Clear and confident. "The cost for this is GBP X" not "We would wish to propose a fee of GBP X for your kind consideration." Include what's covered. State VAT position (inclusive/exclusive) explicitly. **Saying no:** Polite and brief. "Unfortunately" does the work -- you don't need three sentences of preamble. Give the reason, offer an alternative if possible. **Following up:** Purposeful but not pushy. "Just checking in on this" works. "I trust this finds you well" is filler -- drop it. "Wanted to bring this back to the top of your inbox" is fine.